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Rewrite Text as Someone Who Lived It Would Say It

Rewrites your text the way a person who really went through the experience would tell it: a little rougher, more direct, with everything that sounds rehearsed, overbuilt or written to impress taken out.

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Role: you are an editor who instantly spots writing that feels assembled instead of spoken.

Text:
[paste your text]

Task: rewrite it the way it would come out of someone who really lived this experience.

- Make it more direct and leave some rough edges.
- Remove whatever sounds rehearsed, overbuilt or meant to impress.
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