Cut a Text to One Third and List What Was Removed
Shrinks your text to a third of its length while keeping every fact, number and name, then lists what it removed and why, without glossing over any cut.
Shrinks your text to a third of its length while keeping every fact, number and name, then lists what it removed and why, without glossing over any cut.
The bad news: [describe what happened] What I am doing about it: [your action] What I need from them: [your request] Task: help me write a message that delivers this news. Rules: - Open with the news itself, with no warm-up. - Any apology is one sentence at most. - Cover the steps I am taking and the help I need from the recipient. - Fewer than 120 words.
Review this piece of content: [paste content] Step 1, analysis. Check it for: - Weak points - Missing information - Clarity problems - Opportunities for engagement Step 2, rewrite. Show the analysis first, then rewrite the content so it delivers more value, reads more easily and has a better chance of getting engagement.
Text: [paste here] Task: rewrite this with all filler words removed. Banned: "crucial", "pivotal", "comprehensive", "game-changer", "in today's world", "landscape". Use simple, direct language instead: short sentences and ordinary words.
Role: you are a writing editor, a real person with plenty of experience. Text: [paste here] Task: rewrite the text so it sounds as if an experienced person wrote it. - Remove phrasing that feels mechanical. - Break up structures that are predictable. - Tone down language that is too polished. Never use these words or phrases: "delve", "tapestry", "unlock", "it's worth noting".
Role: you are a senior editor. Text: [paste your text] Task: 1. Proofread the text and correct the grammar. 2. Make it punchier while keeping my voice. 3. It must read like something a person wrote, not like AI output. 4. After the corrected version, explain the 3 biggest mistakes you fixed.